At 1/21/10 10:39 PM, Celx-Requin wrote: The first chapter of "Cooljaw: Original Sin" is out!
Any reviews would be appreciated.
Thanks,
- Celx

Please disregard that post, I made the same fucking stupid mistake on the preloader, and needed to resubmit.

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  CoolJaw: O.S. I-V

  by Celx-Requin

  A Tale Of A Man Darkly Dreaming

  Movie

  9,065 Views

  (Ages 13+)

...Sorry

Also, I would like to join this club. I don't know how frequent I'll be, but I'll try to help out a bit. If you want examples my reviews, check out my (recent) flash reviews.

At 1/22/10 12:04 AM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote: Also, I would like to join this club. I don't know how frequent I'll be, but I'll try to help out a bit. If you want examples my reviews, check out my (recent) flash reviews.

I think you are pretty decent and would make a good addition to the club but I dont know if it is ok with coop83 or haggard so just wait for them to post saying ok before making review with the review request club signature.also look at the club rules on the first page when haggard or coop says it is OK

One last thing i would like to request a review for...
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/celx-
requin/the-elegant-parasite-black

Thanks guys!
- Celx

At 1/19/10 03:56 PM, Supersteph54 wrote: Member's Update #28
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
1 ) 4061 | 633 / 633 | 100.00% || 94 | 14 / 14 | 100.00% | Coop83
2 ) 4036 | 629 / 634 | 099.21% || 94 | 14 / 14 | 100.00% | Haggard

Thanks for the update, Steph. Good stuff.

I guess it's time to get rolling again, with the reviews. 16 for the week all told and I've got none done so far. Well, it's lunch, so I'll get started then :)

At 1/21/10 11:59 PM, Celx-Requin wrote: Please disregard that post,

I can go one better ;)

At 1/21/10 10:53 PM, Little-Rena wrote: I wish you hadn't added me, things came up and I was unable to get 100% and that makes me sad

Would you like me to reset your points?

At 1/22/10 12:57 AM, Joshsouza wrote:

At 1/22/10 12:04 AM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote: Also, I would like to join this club. I don't know how frequent I'll be, but I'll try to help out a bit. If you want examples my reviews, check out my (recent) flash reviews.

I think you are pretty decent and would make a good addition to the club but I dont know if it is ok with coop83 or haggard...

... or anyone else in the club :P. I suppose you don't need verification from Coop, Haggard, Fro, me, or any other regular members - if you want to permit someone to the club, you can decide ^^. As Haggard told me a few pages before, the regs aren't some special members or something ;).

Anyway, yeah, InsertFunnyUserName, your reviews are fine ^^. Next update is either Sunday or Monday... or Tuesday if there are any delays, so you have until then, unless of course you want to wait until the update of next week, and do the requests for that update instead of the upcoming one, so you can have more time. Anyway, remember to add the sig at the bottom of your reviews (not obligatory, but gets you more points :P)

At 1/21/10 11:57 PM, Joshsouza wrote:

At 1/21/10 11:51 PM, Surn wrote: I got a challenge for you to review:

Hurshnenglurper 2009

I would also like to join the review crew.

I think you should put on better quality reviews like mine but right now you should make 10 better quality reviews and then you can probably come in but we WILL review your stuff.

Yeah, as Joshsouza said, your reviews aren't too good. Some are OK, but overall they need a bit more work. There are many guides on how to write good reviews, so you can start from there. Once you've written some longer reviews, just tell us and we'll check them out again ;).

At 1/21/10 11:59 PM, Celx-Requin wrote: Please disregard that post,

I can go one better ;)

Your mod powers never cease to amaze me!

At 1/22/10 12:52 PM, Supersteph54 wrote:

At 1/21/10 10:53 PM, Little-Rena wrote: I wish you hadn't added me, things came up and I was unable to get 100% and that makes me sad

Would you like me to reset your points?

On a week that I get 100% yeah, for now, it's fine :p

At 1/22/10 04:05 PM, Celx-Requin wrote:

At 1/21/10 11:59 PM, Celx-Requin wrote: Please disregard that post,

I can go one better ;)

Your mod powers never cease to amaze me!

I'm sure they will at some point. I think there's not much I can do to try and amaze you, in all honesty.

Eyy club, I'm back after a long break. I've been caught up in so much shit I don't even know where to start. And please, I really don't mean to sound like a dick at all, and please don't take it that way, but I requested a couple songs almost a month ago, and still no much feedback. But I know yall are busy, so its all good. Well, here's my first song of the year, rate/review and please I need some very critique feedback hence this is my first dream trance song. Thank You!

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  Dead Winter (Trance Remix)

  by DJ-Chilvan

  A dream trance song with a sad and lonley feel.

  Song

  Trance

  1,307 Views

  PLAY

At 1/22/10 06:58 PM, SCTE3 wrote:

At 1/22/10 06:20 PM, Little-Rena wrote:

At 1/22/10 12:52 PM, Supersteph54 wrote:

At 1/21/10 10:53 PM, Little-Rena wrote: I wish you hadn't added me, things came up and I was unable to get 100% and that makes me sad

Would you like me to reset your points?

On a week that I get 100% yeah, for now, it's fine :p

Wow, Little-Rena, just wow. You don't need 100% every time you know?

IIRC Little-Rena just likes to have 100%. I remember trailing behind him in the old club and one week where he missed a review he took a break from the club. Lol! ^^

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  Minimalism (Day of Trance #3)

  by jxl180

  My first minimal house track

  Song

  House

  1,759 Views

  PLAY

Thank you,
jxl180

Please review my new song ;)

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  [Assios] - The Office Remix

  by Assios

  A techno remix of The Office Theme!

  Song

  Techno

  4,894 Views

  PLAY

I'll respond to all reviews, thanks in advance!

• Unpublished Submission

I'll respond to all reviews, thanks!

hi! goodness! i've found this thread!

will be gladly to receive reviews for this song if you have time:

The Butterfly Song

My second song of the year. It took me several hours to make but the outcome is pretty swell. Please, this is also one of my firsts in a genre like this so please, I need some well rounded feedback. But it should be pretty enjoyable, I don't think there's any problems with this. Thanks.

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  Euphoria

  by DJ-Chilvan

  A mix of ambient, hip-hop, and trance. You can get lost in this.

  Song

  Ambient

  1,482 Views

  PLAY

Hello everyone,

I had a lot of time today, so I finished another "CoolJaw" chapter.
Any reviews would be appreciated!

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  CoolJaw: O.S. II-V

  by Celx-Requin

  A Tale Of A Man Darkly Dreaming...

  Movie

  5,442 Views

  (Ages 17+)

Thanks,
- Celx

here is my latest piece, i am very excite lol. the genre is breakbeat trance, one of my favorites.
Review Request Club is amazing thank you so much for all of your tips and help through my musical growth! thank you for your time and effort :)!

Life is the Drug - BK

can i request an audio portal track on the be half of someone else?

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  MONSTERS ATTACKING THE CITY

  by Civonos

  A great jam!

  Song

  Punk

  2,278 Views

  PLAY

Well, been some time since ive been to this post since i dropped out. Sorry i had to drop out in the first place, but i had too much stuff to do and i wasnt catching up. Anywayz, herez something for u to review, its Supersteph54's and my submission (demo) to the Collab Ep and id appreciate some helpful reviews to help us improve it. Tks!

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  Hell's Remedy Demo (2009)

  by Echo

  A trance song (demo) with a touch of dance. For the Collab EP.

  Song

  Trance

  2,756 Views

  PLAY

Darklight17

At 1/24/10 09:43 AM, Darklight17 wrote: Well, been some time since ive been to this post since i dropped out. Sorry i had to drop out in the first place, but i had too much stuff to do and i wasnt catching up. Anywayz, herez something for u to review, its Supersteph54's and my submission (demo) to the Collab Ep and id appreciate some helpful reviews to help us improve it. Tks!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/2 99541
Darklight17

I'll be counting this as not part of my review list (so if we get 20 requests, I get /19 not /20), if it's OK with you guys.

Also, I'll be updating tomorrow, and I might do the requests list today so I can have time to update tomorrow (I have piano lessons tomorrow so it'll be a little difficult).

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  SN | Bipolar | SN

  by SessileNomad

  ambient-ey idm stuff

  Song

  Miscellaneous

  2,145 Views

  PLAY

As I said, here's the requests list. It's actually quite a good week this time. We have a decent number of Flash Requests, a little less Audio Requests than usual and some Art Requests, plus there aren't many Extra Audio Requests either. Obviously, this week isn't ideal since Audio still beats the other requests by a landslide, but it's better than usual ^^. Also, PowerRangerYELLOW posted a request to an audio submission which wasn't his. I thought that maybe we could make a rule that when people spotlight submissions and they're not part of the club, they get sent to the Optional Requests list, where they will stay on that list for a week, but it won't count towards the RRC. If anyone objects, I'll make sure I don't do it again :P.

Anyway, I hope I didn't miss any requests or made any mistakes, I'm in a bit of a hurry. Anyway, enjoy the requests list!

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Flash Requests (6)
Action Movie! By CRACKPIPE
Intelligent Critique By Waldemar Schuur (W-P-S)
Hurshnenglurper 2009 By Surn
CoolJaw: O.S. I-V By Celx R (Celx-Requin)
Johnny VS Zombies By muffinman9
CoolJaw: O.S. II-V By Celx R (Celx-Requin)

Audio Requests (15)
preview track..need advice pls By MadHamish
80 (WiP) By SFaPiL2
CKC - Avatar By CKC (CKC2009)
Celestial Palace By Birdinator99
Life is the Drug - BK By Bracksta
(FMC) -=Bowser Armageddon=- By FunkmasterCatking
Dead Winter (Trance Remix) By DJ-Chilvan
Minimalism (Day of Trance #3) By jxl180
[Assios] - The Office Remix By Asbjorn (Assios)
The Butterfly By masterhappyboy
Hell's Remedy DEMO - D17-SS54 By Rick Nexus (Darklight17) And Stephan Wells (Supersteph54)
Battle And The Aftermath By Cimba
USB By Sawdust
Zero Gravity (Ryukenjin) by Matthew Boyd (Ryukenjin)
Strangled-you start something by Calamaistr

Art Requests (2)
Two By InsertFunnyUserName
The Elegant Parasite Black By Celx R (Celx-Requin)

Extra Audio Requests (4)
CKC - Amen By CKC (CKC2009)
CKC - Desert Child By CKC (CKC2009)
Euphoria By DJ-Chilvan
Alpha (Ryukenjin) by Matthew Boyd (Ryukenjin)

Optional Audio Requests [does not count towards the RRC] (1)
MONSTERS ATTACKING THE CITY By Civonos

At 1/24/10 12:45 PM, SessileNomad wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/3 06362

Oops, I posted the requests list at almost the same time as you posted that request... Here:

SN | Bipolar | SN By SessileNomad

That means 16 Audio Requests not 15!

Wait, what makes something an extra audio request, as opposed to a regular request?

At 1/24/10 12:51 PM, Supersteph54 wrote: Flash Requests (6)
Audio Requests (16)
Art Requests (2)

Wow, a lot of work to do, better start tomorrow then. As usual a lot of audio requests to do. Glad to see the extra audio requests list gets a bit smaller now.

At 1/24/10 01:06 PM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote: Wait, what makes something an extra audio request, as opposed to a regular request?

Users may only request ONE audio review per week. As you can see, this club gets nearly flooded with audio requests. However, most users request up to three reviews, so we decided to install a "Extra Audio Requests List". Only one request per user per week gets on the regular list, all the other requests go on the extra list. They will get added to the list on the next week, but still only one request per user per week. This way we managed to keep the numbers of audio requests down a bit.

Battle of Supremacy

thanks for reviewing!

I'd just like to say a massive CHEERS to the RRC I was stoked with the feedback you gave me on my song, "I ate the easter bunny".

I've finished another track in a similar fashion... it's slightly more complicated and used a lot more instruments & vocal takes. Any feedback would be appreciated because I had to experiment a fair bit on this one.

Explicit Language Warning for those adverse to that sort of thing:

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  chicken humpin'

  by TheBardOfBlasphemy

  A sad tale of bestiality and incest. Chickens were harmed in the production of this audio.

  Song

  General Rock

  3,750 Views

  PLAY

cheers guys

As promised, here's the update! It only took me less than half an hour this time, so I suppose I'm getting used to it ^^. Anyway, a great week for the RRC in general. 4 people managed all the requests, Fro's back to reviewing audio too, and although not on his usual 100% reviewing streaks, he still did a decent amount ^^, and, well, at least I managed one review xP.

Sadly, we lost a few great members; Sonofkirk and milinko959 who were club regulars and updaters, and aliaspharow who was a great reviewer, even though he did such few reviews. Also, Joshsouza and RogerBK did no reviews again :(, and Little-Rena must be taking another break from the club since he didn't review all of the requests xD.

Oh well, still a good week. By the way, if in one week, someone doesn't review at all but posts only, I still put a star next to his name and count him as inactive, right?

Enjoy the update!

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Member's Update #29
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
1 ) 4167 | 649 / 649 | 100.00% || 106 | 16 / 16 | 100.00% | Coop83
2 ) 4142 | 645 / 650 | 099.23% || 106 | 16 / 16 | 100.00% | Haggard
3 ) 2439 | 376 / 630 | 059.68% || 057 | 09 / 15 | 060.00% | Fro
4 ) 1785 | 280 / 536 | 052.24% || 009 | 01 / 16 | 006.25% | Supersteph54
05 ) 639 | 102 / 242 | 042.15% || 106 | 16 / 16 | 100.00% | SCTE3
06 ) 533 | 082 / 260 | 031.54% || 106 | 16 / 16 | 100.00% | Celx-Requin
07 ) 181 | 027 / 260 | 010.38% || 003 | 00 / 16 | 000.00% | Joshsouza *
08 ) 054 | 008 / 030 | 026.67% || 003 | 00 / 16 | 000.00% | Little-Rena *
09 ) 009 | 001 / 030 | 003.33% || 000 | 00 / 16 | 000.00% | RogerBK *

The stars indicate for how long the user has been inactive in this club. "Inactive" means, that user hasn't gained any points by reviewing OR by posting.
*: User has been inactive last week
**: User has been inactive for the last two weeks
***: User has been inactive for the last three weeks
****: User has been inactive for the last four weeks

If you are inactive for more than three weeks AND if your completion rate falls below 20%, OR if you are inactive for more than four weeks you are excluded from the list. You may rejoin this club, but your points will be lost.

Statistics:
*Requests this week: 16
Total requests all time: 650
Reviews made this week: 74
Average per member: 6.17
Average per request: 4.63

*New To the List:
Leaving the List: milinko959, Sonofkirk and aliaspharow

*All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Celx-Requin and SCTE3

I'll spotlight this submission for next week just because I feel that it could use a good amount of criticism.

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  Battle of the Best

  by slick-sheep

  Battle between the best fighters in the universe, Ken and Ryu

  Movie

  4,507 Views

  (Ages 17+)

Along with it I'll probably request Snow Wars sometime later this week. I'm guessing it should be done and sent to me tonight as the person who has created the menu only has a few things to clean up before it's completely done.