This was almost good.
Well, besides keeping it authentic, your voice should need improving.
i would suggest subtitles.
As for the fan mail, some were long, so much, that i couldnt concentrate where this guy was goin with a particular fan mail.
U could have made it shorter.
the foamy character can read long letters faster, coz it can speak fast. on other hand, illwillpress character reads slowly, so u should have made the fan mails much shorter.
These are just suggestions, coz i want u to make another one, better improved.
so good luck.