question
how the hell does a knife enter his skin when a bullet wont? is he using a pellet gun? idk maybe it was ment to be funny.
Reviews for "Abysmal Adventures #1"
You're right, that was abysmal.
The animation was okay and so were the voices, but over all it ws pretty bad. You seemed to make up the "story" as you were animating this. The idea is a little gross too. With a little work, I'm sure that you could turn this into a non-blamable work of flashy goodness. Whatever that means...
A fresh breath
Yep, this was hot! Though the story had some quirky holes in it, I think you did a great job piecing together a first prt. As has already been stated, a lot of the timing is unrefined in such a way that it steals from the momentum of the entire piece. Things that should not be under-addressed are many, and I insist timing is of the upmost importance especially with action oriented scenes.
I too am looking forward to some wonderful work from you as this series and you skills develop! Keep it up buddy
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Well, that is one fucked up new series.
Decent
You need a faster frame rate or just less pauses in between scenes. Otherwise it was enjoyable. Also the world is wondering how his feet got out of the subway tunnel. Well maybe not the world, just a small percentage of Newgrounds though.