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The new album begins. My voice is heard. My feelings felt. Not classical... But oh well

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love it...

now, my new favorite song. I LOVE YOU MILKMAN-DAN!!! :) again, you have show ur superbity


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ahh crying again

You move me so much. thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us. I, for one, appreciate it deeply.


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Wow, this song is beautiful and inspiring...

Wonderful job, I would like to animate something to this song someday!!


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BEATIFUL!!

this song is deeply touching, i absolutely love the lyrics and the melody...its so ironic cuz i wrote a song and its so similar to yours. Your songs are amazing dont let anybody tell you otherwise. CHEERS!


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a touching masterpiece

the lyrics to the best of my hearing ability comments were placed inside []'s

=================

look in the river
as you run to the fields
were it's greener
do you feel safer

open your eyes ['open' sounds like 'hope in', due to the time taken to pronounce the first syllable]
at the sands of emotion;
consume you
as you tumble down

=CHORUS=

one small mistake
and your whole world changes
to what it could've been

relive that moment
until the pain is gone
but remember:
the battle has only just begun

=END CHORUS=

here you will find
where you once felt
the certainty of reason;
a measure of treason

young were the words, in the arms of another
it cannot replace
the moment of faith
where you thought you didn't love him [it does end with a bit of a 'huh', so it might be 'her' instead]

=CHORUS=

one small mistake
and your whole world changes
to what it could've been

relive that moment
until the pain is gone
but remember:
the battle has only just begun

=END CHORUS=

=================

closing my eyes I see...

a girl, running towards green fields, hiding from pain.
she hopes to reach it, hopes for a better life, but love has consumed her

the lyrics further imply to my that she went to the arms of another, and left the prior love (who won't forgive the actions, the lyrics imply that there's contempt between them)
but she doesn't love this "other" so she remembers the past, where life was a small utopia...

reliving her mistake, reliving the moment she left the first...
he's gone... but there's currently nothing left of him but a despairing shall, who won't forgive her

but there is hope, for her heart's battle has afterall, only begun
so she sets out, hope burning brightly, to the future and whatever it may bring

for me this is quite an emotional song, considering a few relatively recent events in my life, so I give you a kudos and a well done on a fantastic emotional piece, that's easy to relate to.

(and naturally, 5/5, 10/10, etc)


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MilkMan-Dan
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24,781
Downloads
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Score
3.98 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 17, 2007
10:51 PM EDT
Genre
Classical
File Info
Song
2.6 MB
2 min 52 sec

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