Well Done
Very nice, it has a good solid feeling to it. I am going to guess you have had some singing lessons. Lyrics are perfect, but I don't know about the echo effect on your voice it doesn't feel right. Overall Great work.
Reviews for "Just Begun"
MilkMan-Dan responds:
Well I've made some adjustments to the voice... but some like the effects while others don't... But I'm glad you liked it regardless.
Thanks for the review.
Sincerely,
MMD
One word... Fantastic
This is a great song! Love the music, the vocals, the general feel of the song.
Do more similar songs because we need our MMD!
Your music is on my iPod and it is played everyday especially when i am working.
Thanks Dan!
Eagle
MilkMan-Dan responds:
I'm glad you like this and other music I've made soo much. Keep listening and thank you so much for your support mate.
Sincerely,
MMD
5/5
Need I really say more? I mean, its nice to hear another opinion, but mine would definitely be a replica of these two other reviewers. You did a hell of a good job on this song. I won't subtract points for it being in the 'wrong' category, like you said. It still sounds beautiful, and I'm happy you submitted this to newgrounds. This is going to definitely place in the charts, and circulate for a while. I wish you well, man. Take care, and keep up the awesome work!
MilkMan-Dan responds:
Haha it's only in the Classical section for now so it doesn't get emmediatley zero voted since I have more of a fan base here. I'll probubly move it to easy listening or something later.
I hope it makes the top charts... your 5 votes are the only thing that can make that happen and I thank you for them.
Thanks for the review.
Sincerely,
MMD
Wow.
Just wow. I love the effects on the mic. What exactly did you do? You really put yourself out there by putting a vocalized track up. I like it! You've got a good voice.
Man, I'd love to make a vocalized song like this. If you ever need another singer, I'm always available.
Lyrics
The lyrics really fit the mood of this piece. Your voice and the way you articulate most if not all of your phrases makes it seem like the piano and your voice were just... built together. Some people just can not sing to a piano, you are not one of them.
Instruments
I love the voicing of all the instruments. The strings are subtle enough not to take the spotlight, yet this song wouldn't seem right without them. As with all the pieces. The piano is flawless. Like it was built just for this song. Drums... Wow. I find it hard to get drums and vocals to work together right, but you've hit the nail on the head!
Overall
No song is perfect, but this is damn near it.
I would love it if you could rate my newest classical song "Drown Me (Miles Apart)"
I'm considering lengthening it and putting vocals to it...
Good job mate!
MilkMan-Dan responds:
The effects... well you all seem very interested in the effects. Haha... just an autotuner... a little mod delay and a bit of reverb... my voice is weird to begin with.
I'll keep your singing abilities in mind for the future... I have a feeling I'm going to work with alot of artists with this kinda thing.
Thanks for the in-depth review.
Sincerely,
MMD
Excellent vocals, sweet, gentle vibe.
First review :D!
That mic is REALLY giving you some awesome vibes. That autotune which I assume you used, really REALLY helps hit that sweet spot.
The lyrics of this piece are also quite interesting. I can't quite remember all the lyrics, so if you could tell me them in the response that would be swell.
My favorite part is 2:11 where your voice doubles up very slightly and then jumps into that extra reverbed *was there extra reverb there* high octave.
Though I do love the effects on your voice, you know what would have really been sweet here. If you had a quiet segment, with very quiet instruments, and your voice, pure without effects, or minimal effects, sing then. The contrast would have been... brilliant.
Orchestration wise, the song flows pleasently, no hitches, or at least, nothing that jumped out at me. You as the creator probably have like this one spot you don't like. Not a problem for me at this point.
Oh well, sing and get better, because there is potential here, and when you become a millionaire, i'll know where you live :D!
Keep up the good fight Dan, and keep em coming!
MilkMan-Dan responds:
Sure thing buddy. No need to get into too much detail here, so heres those lyrics and thanx for the speedy review :).
Look at the mirror
As you run to the fields
where it's greener
Do you feel safer
Open your eyes
Let the sense of emotion
Consume you
As you tumble Down
One small mistake
and your whole world changes
to what could have been
Relive that moment
Until the pain is gone
But remember
The battle has only just begun
Here you will find
Where you once felt
The certainty of reason
A measure of treason
Young were your words
In the arms of another
It Cannot replace
The moment of fate
When you thought you didn't love her
*Return to Chorus