A VERY good animation with a great story. The story and animation are actually quite good. Sure the animation could use some work but the thing you may need to work on is the spelling and you may wanna fact check yourself.
For one thing the move Vegetto did was NOT the Big Bang Kamehameha. It was a simple kamehameha. The big bang Kamehameha was done like a ball and was performed by Super Sayain 4 Gogeta. You may want to correct this and future errors.
Otherwise the animation was great. Another thing you may want to do is make the on screen text stay for a little longer. It moves so fast that sometimes i had trouble actually reading it AND taking in the scene.
great ending with a cool twist with cell
ill echo with guitan11 the story is appealing and it makes sense in the dragonball universe, the lack of voices really is a dissapointment and i hope we get voices for the next episode.the animation was above the avarage in my opinion but could be better as for the art, could do some work too.
overall, i look forward to see how the story develops as well as the animation
the story actually caught my attention. the rules of the tournament and the parameters make sense in the dragon ball world. the lack of voice disappoints, but i'm sure that the next one will be better
You should look into hiring some voice actors. Besides that, pretty good. I'm willing to participate, and I have other friends who are more than willing to help as well.