Reviews for "Dragon Ball Multiverse 1"

Everyone's saying you need some voice, but you don't if you don't want to.
The story sounds pretty awesome so far, I can't wait to see the next episode....
The animation is also awesome, you put a good amount of detail in the backgrounds, but Goku looks kinda funny. :S

You've got two things going for this, my friend, and thats the animation and bgm. It really is well done, it looks great. The subtitles go too fast sometimes so make sure you give the longer lines some more time so we can read them. I understand why you went with subtitles: hearing amateur voice actors replace the classic voices would almost insult some fans, but if you keep this going for awhile, you may even get sean schemmel and chris sabat to pitch in on this. It's got lots of potential friend,
good luck!

bocodamondo responds:

"Lanipator" sounds exactly like christian sabat...but i think he will not help me...well NOT if i pm him at least...i wish i had good contacts :CCCCCC

Room For LOTS of Improvements -

-Spell grammer needs work; especially with the word pepole ( forgot to add the "H"...OH WAIt, its people, lol).

-Need some voice ( shouldn't be hard to get)

- Music needs improvements ( reminds me play my 16-bit genesis system, lol)

- Animation need slight improvement.

Overall -

its good but hope to see better improvements if your planning to make this a LONG term project and to satisfy Salagir and Gogeta JR.

Good Luck ::thumbs Up::


It looks like it has great potential and I can't wait til the next episodes. One thing I did see was Prince Vegeta turn into a Super Saiyan with Nappa next to him. It may be explained later from his universe but it was something that caught my attention since he couldn't until after Nappa was long dead. Also the Gotenks idea was very very smart lol.
It won't let me choose any stars but i choose 4/5

bocodamondo responds:

those saiyans do have they own story and its one minor differnt which changed everything. kakarot never fell on his head. with it ofcourse he never became goku and killed all humans. so at the moment when raditz came to earth. kakarot didn fight & kill him, he joined them as long with vegeta & nappa as they get to namek . there at the fight with frieza. since vegetas pride wasnt broken due no "goku" existence he succeded to turn into super saiyan instead of failing like in U18. and so he killed frieza

I like the idea behind this, it has a good story so far.

I have a few complaints, but i'm sure everyone has already made them.

1. planets arent shaded balls with ms paint lines around them.
- if you can draw Goku you can do that
2. kamahamaha is not big bang attack
3. voice actors or rather why did you only have the clock say anything
4. have someone oversee your English, it needs help.
5. spell check

Other than those minor things, it is an interesting idea and i would love to see this continued. Please keep some of this in mind when creating your next submission and I'm sure you will draw more credit to yourself as an animator. Keep up the good work!