Moral of the story - Follow your dreams.
You could do some cleanup in the drawings, you could add some shading. That's all my tips.
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Heya!
SO this is an animation I made for a local youth film festival! BUT there is an international film festival that I want to submit it to!
The point is that I NEED YOUR SUGGESTIONS!
Anything you can think of that could make this better and give me a better chance in this film festival will help!
Especially the little details.
I need all the help I can get! Heh
But ya.
For the sound quality... the audio stream was set to ADPCM with a "Sample Rate" of 11 kHz and 5 ADPCM bits.
I couldn't set it to MP3 'cause it would go out of sync...
But leave me your thoughts!
... lotta exclamation marks here
Lovely
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Follow the dreams!
10.
Is a fantastic video with a profound insegnament.
Good job.
P.S.: perdone my english, im italian
It's a 10, but you wanted the little details...
First of all-WOW-GJ.
Little details-
1. Add more time for the graduation picture at the end.
2. In the beginning scenes, make your lines a tad thicker so it doesn't look like chicken scratch.
3. Personally, I don't think it needs music, it's perfect where it is. The silence and Sound FX of your characters keeps me/audience glued to the screen.
4. The dream-A little confusing, but all dreams are. Cool drawings, that's a plus.
5. I suggest you zoom in on the oragami's that he has in the suitcase-this is a tiny detail.
6. After those tips I gave above, don't do anymore to it, or you'll worry yourself in your sleep.
A lot of mystery stirred within me when I tried to figure out what was going to happen, what the climax was. This is a great movie for a film festival-Great idea.
You're on my fav's. Congrats and GL. 10/10
"very good"
um when hes going to work in the hall the arms look a little wierd but after good i'd like to know what happend to him after all will people buy it? very good jokes and everything i liked it i give you an 8/10