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Wall Lunch

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Uploaded
Jun 28, 2005 | 12:48 AM EDT

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3rDAcE3rDAcE

Rated 1 / 5 stars

.....Guy..this was stupid as hell

I haven't seen something, or heard for that damn matter, something so ignorant in my f'in life man. Really... "you could move foward" no....honestly...i hated this shit...you need to get your head outta that fuckin corn cob hick town ya grew up in and just do something a litle more legitimate....you got talent...but you obviously don't know how to use it homie



caninecannibalcaninecannibal

Rated 3 / 5 stars

this was decent

i enjoyed this. the poem was alright, didn't make a lot of sense to me. but the artwork was pretty kickass, and at least it showed some originality. not bad, friend. keep it up.



Grey-MoleGrey-Mole

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good drawings, but i wished the characters moved

i thought this was a nice little poem and deserves its due respect, but it is kind of disapointed. even though you are new at this (im just guessing cause you only have one other flash) you should attempt to make more then just pretty art work and witty poems. im just saying to keep moving forward, not saying this was bad. it wasn't bad at all, I loved it. just some constructive critism......keep up the good work.....(aquward silence).......(more aquward silence).....(die of old age in because every few sconds there was more f****** aquward silence).


RoyceBiggins responds:

i'm going to level with you. I didn't understand any of that last bit, but thanks...contented silence...more contented silence... live a long prosperous life every few seconds theres a more nice contentment gurrgle. fantasy legion?


JaconWesJaconWes

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

i always like dis poetry yah

Heh dude that is some pretty nice drawing and the poem was pretty good u must of got an A in english.
Anyways the everything was average and i laughed at the two dumbasses, kids never eat or play on brick walls taller than ur house. a 3.5 out of 5



MyDerby777MyDerby777

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice work.

My only critiques on this flash are on the audio and animation. Before I say anything further I have to let you know that the style, ideas, and writing were absolutely solid. In fact I loved it. However, it was very hard to hear the narration and the slide show format could have been better if replaced with animation. Again, this flash was great but with some work it could be spectacular.