good drawings, but i wished the characters moved
i thought this was a nice little poem and deserves its due respect, but it is kind of disapointed. even though you are new at this (im just guessing cause you only have one other flash) you should attempt to make more then just pretty art work and witty poems. im just saying to keep moving forward, not saying this was bad. it wasn't bad at all, I loved it. just some constructive critism......keep up the good work.....(aquward silence).......(more aquward silence).....(die of old age in because every few sconds there was more f****** aquward silence).