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Star_Crossed (unfinished full)

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Well, here is the long awaited full version... it's not finished... but here's a little something to tide you guys over...

plus for chim chime :D
A worn traveler opens his door, and looks up to the skies. A starry, moon-lit expanse meets him, and the stars seem to dance in front of the traveler's eyes. He must be hallucinating, thought the traveler. But the dance of the Star Crossed was too beautiful. And the traveler watched, hypnotized.

Left and right, the stars threw themselves into the sky, crissing and crossing every witch way, dashing across a wonderful world of darkness and beauty.
The stars wouldn't stop for the world.
They sped up, forming wondrous patterns, radiating intense lights, weaving through the night.
The stars felt like they had never felt before; Such freedom they had never know.
A subtle beat seeped out from one of the stars, a second star created un uplifting tune, and a third continued to dance.
In perfect harmony, more and more people were affected by these mystical stars.
The traveler danced with his heart.
A little girl, lying in bed, had the sweetest dreams she has had in years.
A poor sick soul, bed ridden and burning with pain, felt nothing while the stars danced.
While each soul affected reacted in a different way, each felt the one beautiful, harmonious, amazing, uplifting emotion in the world.
And all because of the Dance of the Star Crossed.


I love it.

The beginning hooked me in, it really stood out. I listened to the entirety of the song afterward and it did not disappoint.

Fantastic intro

Probably one of the best intros to a song I've heard for a long time, although the rest isn't quite up to that standard. Still great nonetheless. 9/10 5/5


ive been checking pretty much every day on your page for this :] it sounds just as fantastic as the demo, and was everything to be expected. i listened to the demo so much that when it got to the part that the demo usually cut off, it took a a second to realize that it was still going xD

but apparently its gonna continue to get better coz its STILL not done! one thing i think you should do in the full version is make the tune a bit louder when the bass kicks in. thatd add a whole new dimension of power to the song. i really cant wait for the full ver :]

oh and one thing. im working with FL8 and im pretty sure that ur working with FL6, arent you? do you think you could tell me where you got the grand piano sound Dx thatd be great.

continue the awesomeness!

9/10 - 5/5

Desyre responds:

WELL... I can talk to envy about that... and yeah I agree with the power thing. It was side-chained a little too much... anyway... thank you for the review :)

If that's a demo...

... what will the FULL version be? I wonder...
Really nice, keep it up :)

Nice tunes!

It's a really banging tune with a crazy hard trance synthesizer but something is missing and that something makes the main melody and the build up low and disappointing.

When it builds up, with the snares and the synthesizer raising in volume, it got me hyped up but then when it starts the synthesizer goes down in volume and it feels like it's not epic enough. I think the side chaining is not that good, raise the volume of the synth melody, by a considerable amount so it balances the intro as well, as for now it sounds alright but the volume is low. Raise it and it will be totally EPIC. I will favourite this for now. Keep doing what you doing! ;]

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4.41 / 5.00

Sep 20, 2008
11:52 PM EDT
File Info
4.5 MB
1 min 59 sec

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