this gets older and older its kinda boring now
JESUS FUCKING CHRIST ALMIGHTY!!
That was better than most actual books published! really! send this to a publisher! 100% garuntee it will work! wow! i love your work, whenever someone asks what my favorite book is, im saying this =D
you rule.
After a staggering 30 minutes of staring at the eggs and hasbrown so poorly made, i start my prayers to god, hoping that the next time i open my eyes, the food will be gone.
At 7/8/06 12:23 PM, The_D-Lucks_Edition wrote:At 6/28/06 03:02 PM, Sora9878 wrote: can someone give me a link to his new story i cant find itHere you go Sora9878! ; )
omg that was the best story i hav evr read in my life. good work
At 4/8/06 10:34 PM, -Tantalus- wrote:
Does Adam...
A) Get up and do what the man wants
B) Try to fight him off
C) Pull out his wang and begin masturbating, as it may be his last
D) Use the raped girl as a shield
ok use D
Man, you're an extremely talented writer. I love the mix of sex, action, and violence, it's all good lawl. This would make an awesome flash as either a game or just a story. I'm still on page 28 though, tryin to catch up..nice job
Or just read it here on Newgrounds. But either way, let this thread die. If you have questions or comments, just PM me with them.
this was an awesome story. too bad i wasnt here for any of the choosing. either way more ppl hafta read this. george bush commands so (would provide pic of george bush however i cant find it)
siglololol
b) follow the chick, try to start a conversation.
At 2/9/07 02:27 PM, zomboid15 wrote: b) follow the chick, try to start a conversation.
I love it when they do this. A) Stories over. B) You missed that section by I dunno... a few months.
siglololol
Who has a chance to be the new storyteller?
At 4/8/06 09:31 PM, Tantalus wrote: Does Adam...
A) Continue on the bus to school
B) Follow the chick, try to start a conversation
C) Follow the chick, rape her fine ass
D) Begin publicly masturbating on the bus to get her attention
I'll go with A. Surely a perv like Adam has a hotter chick's fine ass to rape. That eliminates B and C. If he started fapping off to her, he'd look like a complete moronic boodb to everyone else, eliminating choice D.
At 6/21/06 03:26 PM, Tantalus wrote:At 6/21/06 03:18 PM, teh_ecks_bawks_hater wrote: The first few parts of the story were funny; *stuff*Yeah, you're right. And I've thought about it, and I've already decided the next story will contain no wanking/sex period. Looking back, every single sex/fapping scene I wrote sucked balls and brought down the quality of the story. If my only fanbase is a bunch of fap-happy kids who find wanking hilarious, then sucks to me. I'm not putting any sex or masturbation into the sequel, but that doesn't mean it can't be good.
Well it looks like i stopped reading this. But listen yer going down the wrong path. I know you dont want a bunch of sickos reading this just for the pron. But just have less fapping not no fapping,and use a better word. And dont just have it "LOl my daddy cant rape me any more lets celebrate by fucking". Have it be more passionate. This does need the sex and masturbation and hell maybe even one or two rape scenes. Thats what makes it well rounded and keeps our attention. You have violence, kick ass gunz, a nice plot,and cute girls. But you also need sex rape and fapping,but a smaller amount. And a little more detailed. I envision this story as a story with Violence, Plot,Sex Guns,Deception,Rape,Secret Underground Organizations, Enemies, Friends and fapping. Plz make the dream a reality.
>:(
At 4/15/07 03:27 AM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: Well it looks like i st
No, shut the fuck up, seriously, you are creepy and you need to resist the urge to post on every single sex story on NG, its getting weird now, please stop, please.
This is a pretty good series. Don't let anyone discourage you. Make a sequal! I bet it'll be even better!!!
Mmmmmm vampires =)
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At 4/24/07 06:43 PM, Liteice wrote: I SAY C!
its the best 1.
The topic is over, you are late around 1 year. So you can keep posting how good this is or not.
yeah it was okay...he goes from being a sex perverted ass raper...and i thought it was going to be all about that...to him being a hero!
kinda lost interest after the 16th page or so
I am the original person who changed this signature....you can use it if you like.
Three words
BEST.
THREAD.
EVER.
It was the best I ever had!
At 5/3/06 08:08 AM, MrAltaco wrote: This story is both awesome and hilarious, but nothing is as hilarious as showing this thing to your friends.
I pick A
you got me nig. you got me. i saw the title and i was like shit!! and closed out as fast as i could.
At 7/19/08 01:24 AM, TyPah wrote: D), just to see what happens next, and who knows?
ffs, look at the last few pages, its dead, its finished. You are about 1-3 years late.
At 6/13/06 08:23 PM, Tantalus wrote: "If you'll excuse me," Adam began, "I've got to go to my room. There's something I need to take care of." Adam exited the courtroom alone, made his way down the familiar dank hallway and reentered his room. Adam laid down on his bed and had a long wank. It had been a while.
Amazing story. That was one of the best things ive ever read and i think that you should become a writer or have this published. also the ending. FUCKING WIN!!!
08 users suck >:(
Was this story
(A) FUCKING AWESOME
or
(B) FUCKING AWESOME
I love this story and loved the ending, too, Tantalus, you are a genius.
If you want to look down upon people, raise your head higher.
So I'm walking down the street, and here comes Santa blasting dubstep.
"Did I ever tell you what the definition of insanity is?
was her name tenneassi
omtish
Uhh is it me or was this thread made in 2007.
2006 actually. Twas good though, a distinct memory from the past few years of Newgroundsing.
At 5/11/59 09:17 PM, Wolverine said:
| No no-neck redneck dumps on my wife and gets away with it!
At 9/4/10 02:31 PM, WaterBurn wrote: C) Fuck her but don't rape her.
Fuck off bumping a dead thread from a long time ago.
