Meh
Gameplay:
The gameplay was really weak and short. There were some minor jump&run parts as well as really really basic puzzles.
If you're not doing real gameplay, do none at all.
3/10
Story:
The flash was really short, and scarce of any story at all. Grow up, overcome some hurdles and meet a girl doesn't really count as a story. Maybe if you had continued his life from that point on, but not this way.
3/10
Graphic:
Probably the best point of this flash. While the backgrounds looked really fine and atmospheric, the rest of the graphics was average. The whole color-theme of black/white/gray/red is more than overused, especially in combination with that artsy kind of flash games.
7/10
Music:
The music was nice but again more than overused in this type of games.
7/10
Overall:
You created a lackluster art game, missing any kind of decent story or gameplay. Next time you should try it with a flip-book and focus more on the art.
5/10
2/5