Dude this movies' Deep
This is one of the most soul touching things i ever read.
You see it and you feel it you know...
Reviews for "Enlightenment"
this isnt poetry, its crap
what the fuck is this?! no the world is not dying, nor was it ever living. i have not forgotten who nurtered me, not to forget neutered. do you think your some sort of 12 year old genius philosipher? well heres some news you little pre-pubesent teen: your not a genius, your a donkey raping asshole-fingering 12 year old douchbag with no friends. and i would like to know why you decided to place those baby shit colored clouds in. is there a god? ohhhhh so dramatic, this is just a riot. must understand ourselves? are you implying that i do not control my own body? dont make me rub my shaved sackage all over you little boy... because i will.
BOTTOM LINE: more interesting shit has come out of my ass
Excelent
This is the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
o darn
dammit, what is this? Some might think of me as "unenlightened" or something like that, but I don't believe this crap. The title: Enlightenment. This isn't an enlightenment, this is an idea. What, so now OUR ideas aren't actually as good as these? Half of this is crap anyway! Fate is never fulfilled... If it wasn't fulfilled, wouldn't your fate be to not do what that other fate was? I have ideas, too, and I have no need for these, especially when they make no sense at all. Try thinking this over and you'll see how bad this is. I think some of it is good, but overall it's not really all that great.
the message was good...
I like the message that you are trying to get across, but you might wanna think about putting some animation to it next time.