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Primal War 20 vol 2

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Well it has been 5 years since I started the first now here is the last. I had to do major cuts cause of the file size , maybe I will release a directors cut , but here it is the last one . hope you enjoy.


Sexy Witch

The way that booty movin' I can't take no more
Have to stop what I'm doin' so I can pull her close
I'm tryna find the words to describe this girl
Without being disrespectful!!!!
Damn girl
Damn, you's a sexy witch
A sexy chick
Damn, you's a sexy witch
A sexy witch

Definitely worth it!

For my 200th review, this is going to encompass both parts.

Animation: A lot of people in animation are usually against using a style akin to a superhero comic because the results usually look like shit, but when done right; it's a blast to watch. (Just like good rotoscoping, segment tweening, and sprites.) Throughout both parts, it was mostly well done with correct anatomy and proportions. However, in the first part; the archery animations, along with the White Gorilla's running slash combo lacked secondary motion. I think that you should get some references for future projects. On the other hand, clever usage of flash gradients.
Music and sound: Great job on the behalf of Bosa on the music, which suited the large scale battle through out the episode. I think more people on the audio portal should consider doing some orchestra music that aren't David Orr and Zack Striefel. Plus, the sound effects fit quite well, but considering the volume that they were playing at; there were times when they were popping and cracking. I think that it's imperative that you watch your sound levels regardless if you're recording your own or using stock sounds from various free sound sites.
Content: I have to say, this is one of those few things that is worthy of being called epic. You had a lot going on here, and it was excellently directed and timed. Plus, seeing that you did something with your own characters; that makes it even better. (I don't have a beef with derivatives/parodies, but half the time they usually turn out to be uninspired or downright shit.) On the other hand, I think you should proofread your text because those spacing mistakes in the outro text are like a small chip on a windshield.

What I like:
-Almost perfect art and animation
-Great direction
-Excellent music and sound
-Top-notch choreography

What I don't like:
-Some of the character animations lack secondary motion, which makes them look stilted and awkward.
-The sound could have been mixed better.
-Spacing mistakes.

Overall: For an overall satisfying experience, here's a ten to one ConceptArt.org member from another.

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From the beginning till the end...

I watched and waited for every single episode You made! And Till the end it was just awesome. Many episodes took my breath away!

Animation 10/10
Story 10/10
Audio 10/10
Overall Design 10/10

All my 10 are belong to this!


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Climax is awesome

you did a great ending


Still ok

Well i didn't noticed any improvements but i guess you were trying to be consistent with your animation.Its still pretty entertaining and its the most complex animation i have seen on newgrounds.

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Credits & Info

4.06 / 5.00

Jun 4, 2011
7:34 AM EDT