This definitely looks like a burger, so that's good. The shading is decent and I like how the cheese folds and how the lettuce folds. But, it has a few problems.
The background fits with the font choice, but neither of them really fit with the burger. Most of the textures are good, but the bun looks odd to me. It looks like it's growing manly stubble. And while burgers are indeed quite manly, I wouldn't really want to eat one if it was growing a beard. It's also got some jagged edges on it.
Overall, It's good, but the bun and the background need work.
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Basic, but a decent effort
I'm not the biggest fan of your two dimensional lettuce leaf here, but the rest of the image is quite good. The bun has nice texture to it, but this is quite let down by other aspects of the food having "perfectly smooth" form, which just doesn't occur in real life. Curl the edges of the cheese down, while you're at it ;)
The background is quite large, not really allowing the piece to be shown off - McDonalds for example fills your TV screen with a shot of the burger, to make the most possible impact, with the promotion of their products. You might have chosen a better font / colour for the wording, as this can negatively affect the product, as if you're trying to advertise it, but only half heartedly.
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the cheese does bend :D
Well this is pretty nice for a drawing of a burger. You can clearly see the buns, lettuce, tomato, cheese, burger patty, and other nice details. The shading and coloration of it is also nice. Background is quite dull though.
I think you could have tried a bit of humor though by adding the cat Burger and Fries in there somewhere or possibly as a background for a good little laugh.
Overall, nice burger art.
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It's a good little 3D rendering, but it has ome things you should fix.
For instance, it doesn't look very realistic. Now I know your style is more cartoony, but the texturing on the bun for example looks way off, looks more like sand to be honest. The meat too looks more like a lump of something brown. and the salad looks a bit off. See if you can add some running ketchup, give the meat some more texture, and change the texture on the buns. Also, it has some sharp edges, so you should smooth those out (:
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ok thanks :)
Looks like a burger. I'm not that much of a good art reviewer, I have to say. But what I do see definitely looks like a burger, and has a cool way of being made, looks like a piece of plastic. lol. Admittedly, there's not that much more that can be done with a burger, but... what's there is pretty darn good!
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