Refreshing take on collaboration
I found it pretty cool that you hopefully opened the door on the possibilities of collaboration. Alot of times writers get a bad rep for 'not doing hardly any work'. This case the writing pretty much carries the load and does so to a point where i didnt really miss the animation.
The artwork and voice work paired well with the story and the story itself was unnusual enough to feel like going through it all.
My only gripe is that the text is pixelated unless I zoom in. Dont know if thats the limitation of the site or it was published that way but i have a pet peeve with typography that isnt prestine. Maybe raise the publish quality of the bitmaps?
That was my only gripe and thus the 9/10
Maybe assorted page turning sound effects that cue when the page is released after its dragged to a point?