Amazing.
I loved the art style, language, voice acting and everything else there is to say about it. It had a very cozy story-book feeling which is probably what made this so amazing. Very good!
Reviews for "A Bid For Freedom"
Excellent!
I really enjoyed the entire story, EXCEPT for the Youtube reference. A few of your other references added to the story - for example, the talk of "cheeseburger" colognes really played on the ridiculous tendencies of the overly wealthy. However, the Youtube seemed oddly out of place, and really struck me as taking away from the fantastical nature of the story. Perhaps it is only me, since I have not bought into the frenzy of that particular website, but it seemed like you were just trying to make some appeal to a lowest common denominator.
I have to give it to the art, however, as well as the narration. The background sounds and music that were behind the narration as well fit seamlessly into to the reading. You almost didn't notice them unless you really listened, but the the music added to the emotions and energy almost unconsciously. That's a very good thing.
9/10.
Nicely done
I really liked how this was written. Your command of language and imagery is wonderful! You definitely provided a colorful display and vibrant story that was both enjoyable and stimulating.
The narration was great, the voices were well done, and the story was engaging-- albeit it did move just a little bit slowly at times.
I didn't like the ending, but that's not to say that the ending wasn't good. This is quite the short story and I think it would do well in print!
Overall this was quite the page turner (no pun)!
5-5 10-10
AMAZING!
Wonderful way of telling a story and may I add that the language of the story was really good! It would'nt have been the same without the voice actors, I REALLY hope to be seeing more of you and these stories, nice one!
AdamCook responds:
They really did deliver, and their voices add a whole new dimension to the story!
We'll definitely keep producing great works to entertain you guys for a long time to come. Thank you!
it was great ^^
i think ALL books should be like this. XD
AdamCook responds:
Hahaha, if they were, more people would read them! Virtual paper and interactive books aren't far off now I'd reckon, so here's to some exciting new writing! Cheers!