Good Start
I liked it, I just wish it was a bit longer. You should expand on this and build a story. Why is she Emo?
What does she do when she gets to school?
who are her friends?
Is she single?... Emo Girl is HOT!
Reviews for "Emo Girl"
carolshki27 responds:
hot, eh? ok ok. im doing part 2 but i guess i'll make another flash including both part 1 and 2 so that it could be longer..gah
not bad
pretty good art and all. you have potential, but you didn't use all of it here. kinda shows what goes on inside the minds of depressed people though. kinda tough to read at times, but you can figure it out more or less. one thing though, you should have added the NG preloader, just to make it have a buffer for those on slower computers, and so it would'nt loop. i would have given you a higher score, but i think you probably could have made it a little better than this. or maybe you haven't really had flash that long...what do i know? learn a bit of simple actionscript (button functions, start/stop) and you can make great work with time. looking forward to your development as a flash artist!
carolshki27 responds:
thanks for the encouragemnt there but im still learning..hehe
Great
text could be improved though :)
You should actually learn how to use flash
It's not that hard once you get your head around it, and it's certainly easier than just drawing an image then pasting it into flash everytimeyou want a bit of animation
Type flash tutorials into google or something...
I learnt how to do it from a book at work, Just keep practicing
Nice
Yeah, i think you should keep on making flash, that was good for a first try. Maybe try to use a replay button instead of a loop or just making it a bit longer. But overall I liked it. Nice work