not bad
it's not bad, and is certainly on it's way. it needs to be longer though, and please add a preloader so it does not loop.
Reviews for "Emo Girl"
carolshki27 responds:
i dont know how to make a preloader..i'll make another flash with preloaders and everything..gah
Not bad for the first try...
I hate monday's too...But keep up the effort, I'm sure if you continue working on it, you could do better. Guess the emo girl has something to look forward too :p
carolshki27 responds:
thank u
bad
yep thats how your doing- nah im just kidding its okay- nice drawn animation
Not good.
Not the animation. That was pretty good for the first submission.
But the "plot" was pretty nonexistent and I don't know, why this "I hate myself and want to die"-attitude is so sought after anyway.
Not too good
This could really use some work. Try actually animating them together, rather than just a bunch of pictures. A clear "The End" kind of thing would be nice, instead of just looping it. I did not like your method of displaying text, most was hard to read and went by awfully quick. Keep at it, you'll get better