Hmmm.
Pretty nice. I like your choice of music, but why did you make it a loop?
Reviews for "Emo Girl"
carolshki27 responds:
it wasnt supposed to be a loop..i dont know how to make a preloader and a replay button..still learning :)
It makes me depressed.
The animation, the music, the whole mood of the flash, it's almost enough to make me go emo, very good for a first shot though.
carolshki27 responds:
thank u :)
A very good first flash.
For the tutorials flashs , it is in a collection , click on collection , after , click on flash tutorial collection to view them.
Bad points : Theres is two white band at each side of the flash ( fixe that as an uptade ) and the flash loops , there is no replay button. On graphic purpose , you did a good job ( if I exclude the lines definitions => shape of the objects aren't highs qualitys ).
Good points : you did the character ''emo'' pretty well ( i mean , his psychologique depression disposition was what justified her word ), it was a good character devloppement and the flash worth the watch.
Well , I hope i may helped you in your ( maybe ) next flashs. Feel free to comment on my new pages. I voeted 4 to encourage you.
carolshki27 responds:
thanks a lot..but i dont know on how to delete the white bands on either sides of my flash..mann this is hard
Good Job Lady
You say that you need help , so here you can find it , i hope you can became a flash artist .
carolshki27 responds:
thanks for the link
Nice.
Make it longer. Add a replay button. Use a preloader from newgrounds. Use a tutoriaal from newgrounds. Use the flsh forum its there for a reason. And CONTINUE this flash. :) nice work.
carolshki27 responds:
thank u but where is the tutorial anyway? sorry..im a noob