Great
Great story. Animation just needs a little work.
Great
Great story. Animation just needs a little work.
Pretty good
Seems a tad bit shakey which makes it kinda hard to pay attention to for me but i like it a lot and well done!
I would maybe change the font or make it a bit bigger cause its kinda hard to see.
I dont see a whole lot that is really wrong just needs some fine tuning and could be a master piece of the top 50 =) keep working hard and youll get there easy ;)
cheers!
i will do my best..im still learning on how to make a preloader and a replay button. :)) emo girl 2 is done but it still doesnt have a preloader
nice
nice video,i hate videos without end(like emo's ones,vid repeats)
Good!
It is a good start :) jsut Try to make the quality of the images better and you will get a descent flash movie :^)
I liked this and the music made me relax thanks! ^_^
Interesting
This kind of reminds me like filming Flash with Window Movie Maker in the silent movie format with how it was done, great job for your first flash and great style.