Hmmm.
Pretty nice. I like your choice of music, but why did you make it a loop?
Reviews for "Emo Girl"
carolshki27 responds:
it wasnt supposed to be a loop..i dont know how to make a preloader and a replay button..still learning :)
Watching
For a first flash I am going to say that this is very well done, maybe could use more of a story behind it all, but good for a first flash. Keep up the good work my friend
carolshki27 responds:
wow thanks friend xDD
AAA
style is ok,i rate u 4.YA,u deserve the underdog
If she were real....
I'd fuck her...
Shame she'd just slit her wrists when we were done...
If I didn't know she were emo, I'd swear it was because I'm such a terrible lay ;_;...
OH! right.... erm, voted 5! great first flash! >>;...
carolshki27 responds:
hahaha..xD
Highly Impressive Inaugural Flash
While the lack of a preloader and replay button hinder it somewhat, it seems like plenty of people have told you that already, so just keep learning until you get those techniques down.
As for style, it was good and a bit more unique than usual, albeit rudimentary. If you were to practice on polishing it up just a bit, it would be beneficial.
The music flowed well, and fit the mood of the scenes., and sounds effects would be useless in this type of work.
However, the length of this piece negatively affects it. Were part two a bit longer, it would be great.
However, if this is your first entry, I am sure you will only make better and better submissions. I greatly look forward to the next batch of your work. Keep it up.
carolshki27 responds:
thank u..i will do my best next time