Ehh....
It was pretty good, but it just wasn't interesting. Well, that's my opinion anyway.
Reviews for "Emo Girl"
not bad
it's not bad, and is certainly on it's way. it needs to be longer though, and please add a preloader so it does not loop.
carolshki27 responds:
i dont know how to make a preloader..i'll make another flash with preloaders and everything..gah
A very good first flash.
For the tutorials flashs , it is in a collection , click on collection , after , click on flash tutorial collection to view them.
Bad points : Theres is two white band at each side of the flash ( fixe that as an uptade ) and the flash loops , there is no replay button. On graphic purpose , you did a good job ( if I exclude the lines definitions => shape of the objects aren't highs qualitys ).
Good points : you did the character ''emo'' pretty well ( i mean , his psychologique depression disposition was what justified her word ), it was a good character devloppement and the flash worth the watch.
Well , I hope i may helped you in your ( maybe ) next flashs. Feel free to comment on my new pages. I voeted 4 to encourage you.
carolshki27 responds:
thanks a lot..but i dont know on how to delete the white bands on either sides of my flash..mann this is hard
A very solid first submission
Like many have said, the text was a little too blurry. No real story, but a nice insight into a character's mind. I look forward to seeing your future animations.
bad
yep thats how your doing- nah im just kidding its okay- nice drawn animation