At 3 hours ago, LegolaSS wrote:
At 3 hours ago, CloudEater wrote:
Personally I think this would be 5.2 times better without the poorly drawn tits.. >:Ias in if they were drawn better? or as in if they are not part of the picture... anyway, I'm still working on it, so any comments and crit are welcome...
Like without them there at all.. (or not as big) *
As I scroll down it's like, wow a very well painted classy lad-.. oh, she's just a whore, how disappointing.
But if you did draw them better and more realistic then it'd probably be acceptable.
This is my analysis of your drawing. Red is where I see her shape to be.
At the moment they seem very lopsided and too far to her left. Red line points down chest, though I seem to have drawn that slightly too far to her right and ms paint doesn't have layers and so erasing is.. yeah. Green is boobs, she is obviously facing slightly off to the right of screen and her left shoulder seems slightly lifted; hence her left mammary should appear smaller and not as low and they need to seem a lot more parallel and even and all that, grey dots. The right one does not seem to have the right shape. You must get the shading correct so they seem good and proper.
* They're too big as well and really take the focus away from the really great work you've done so far on her face, hand, and hair.
So yeah, that's some of my thoughts spewed out into unstructured sentences for your reading pleasure. Feel free to acknowledge or disregard as much of it as you wish.