At 4/22/12 08:54 PM, Knocturne wrote:
I am not gonna lie, that is exactly what happened.
C'MON KNOC, THE PLANET PLUTO ISN'T AS IMPORTANT AS US. But I understand.
At 4/22/12 10:43 PM, EJR wrote:
Done with 18. Let me know if you want the effects removed.
Neat-o, I like it.
At 4/23/12 05:36 AM, M-Vero wrote:
No idea what I want him to be grabbin' at yet, so for now, little dude just wants some poorly rendered dick.
Sans dick, that is quite nice so far. Lookin' forward to the final product. And actually, the poorly rendered dick ain't so bad either ;)
At 4/23/12 07:06 PM, creepyboy wrote:
Sweet. Here's a WIP. Feedback is appreciated.
What Dweeby said, also the lines could use some more variation. Using the pen tool, you have a lot of wasted potential here. Variate up the yin yang, man! Pick a brush that tapers at the end for her jawline/bangs/stuff like that! It'll look a lot nicer. Also, she seems kind of uneven/lopsided, you might wanna look into that. Her nose is randomly pointing to one side, her cheeks are flat but also poofy, the perspective is a bit wonky in general.
Overall, there is a lot wrong with this picture, but judging from what you've made in the past, I know you have the capability to make something a lot better than this. In my opinion, you should scrap this and try a different idea. Thanks!
I know they aren't the most invigorating choices left, but we're running out of time, and if you make something really clever out of it, you'll look SO COOL in front of your friends.