Certainly I don't have to tell you this is an excellent game. You did a great job drawing me in from the beginning and I'm the type of online gamer that usually flips through dialog and cinematics. I enjoy the art a lot and the music is pleasant. This feels like a professionally made game and I think it would fit well in an Android market or a console eShop.
I hope you continue to work on more games like this. I really can't say enough good things about this.