Cool Concept, bad drawing, you characters have no structure, feels like you ripped them off some silly anime, the muscles are all guessed and they don't move like real people, look at walk cycles, different gestures, and work on timing, it seems very off.
That was very amazing although it needed some fixing with:-
the camera angles:-
some of the angles were weird and I had problems to understand from which angle was it,
the Frame rate:-
I don't know how much frames you've used But I get it needs more frames.. and more smooth movement.
Note: I watched it in all of the qualities)
one last thing the Voice acting:-
it was perfect although some places needed a voice acting Like when she was swinging her arms and giggling although she wasn't in voice.
over all this is a very amazing Animation, I really liked it, Waiting for the Next part :)
that was pretty cool cant wait to see other episodes where we get to see some fighting =) the part with the knife and the wolf was sweet
THAT WAS AMAZING #2 #2 HURRY HURRY!!!!! xD