Reviews for GunChest Episode 04_01

[ralip1]

what? stop rushing through the series

the series is getting worse and worse... It was REALLY good when it started, with careful voice acting and syncing between voices and mouth movements.... And whats with all the pauses between dialogue and plot advancement/other dialogue (though it only occured once)

Ontop of that, the episode ended rather abruptly and it didnt really feel like the plot advanced, kind of like a filler episode.

The biggest problem in my opinion is the voice acting because it seems like no one puts any real emotion or character into their words, it seems more like they're reading with forced/fake emotion.

but the graphics are amazing.

[DaRkKiNgRaVeN]

megamans red headed stepchild?

not that its a bad thing but seriously, the similarities from megaman x, and this are astounding, its like the generic version. but either way the animation was nice but more was needed for this one... by the way did you create this with megaman in mind? cause if so then nice job i guess....

[Grandvision]

Not bad but needs some work certainly.

You could haver explained a bit more of the story here and I defined think this episode was the shortest which the ratings goes down a bit, I;m sorry to to disappoint you but it was not that interesting. It seems that you are running out of ideas and I hope you a drawn a storyboard first before animating as it would be a great advantage to this series. I hope you improve the smoothness of the animation. They move quite choppily and have some unrealistic graphics. More textures and rendering would be nice, Take your time as I can see your releasing them in a short period of time. Put more effort in to your work and you will definetly see improvement.

[shin-kun]

AN A for for effort, an F for story line.

Reason I say this is because.

1. I was dissapointed as to how the 3d thing looked, but it could be my computer slowing who the fuck knows, you might as well have some kinda futuristic fucking computer that helped you make all that shit.

2. The voice acting sucked, i'd of rather watched it in korean.

3. The guns on a persons chest thing is above outragous. If I had guns on my chest, i'd have to wear a goddam bra too. Everytime I need to go under cover for prostitution stings, i'll just aim my knockers of death at the guy( girl )

And 4. Icouldn't stand watching it, I didn't even watch the first few seconds of it, just because of how regtarded it seemed.

[Stickmaster200]

The Newgrounds Touch

One thing I learned on watching movies develop on newgrounds. Is something called the "newgrounds touch" where the series continue to get better over time but unfortunately this seems like its being shipped out of a simple production plan with no redefining moments. Here is a list of things you could improve.

1. 3d models- As a 3d modeler myself I can tell you it never hurts to add more detail to your character and overall design.

2. smoother animations- You can easily afford the extra hours rendering for a better frame rate.

3. Better Storyline- The story line started out interesting but your trying to go everywhere with it at once stay on one subject before moving on.

4. Better voice acting- The script and voice acting is really dull. Which I'm guessing is because you directly translated the Korean to English which never works out. Try finding someone who knows both languages really well to rewrite the dialog.