Not bad
I figure not every episode will be actionpacked you need that downtime to add story.
Im loving the more detailed backgrounds, the humor parts are just a bit off, and some tighter voice acting would go a long way in this dept.
keep up the good work.
Everything good excpet voice acting
The story line and graphics are good, but the voice acting is terrible
Much to discuss....
Now like the other three episodes the animation, backround (like the sky & stuff) & 3D modeling were above par, so those were good. Back round music wasn't really noticed until just now while I write this, but it was original & I have nothing negative to say about it, so it was also good. But this is the downfall of the series man, both the voice acting & script were definitly not up to Newgrounds standards! It was so cheesy & has an uncomfortably cartoony, child-like feel to it. So- too much gay & not enough serious action! That would make it! If you made it darker with a more mature theme to it! Do that, & your brain child will be complete & not only will the rest of this online community rave about it, I'll would rank it up at ten stars as well!
hmmm
so the animation is very good. Like some said..the voice acting should be more...adult. Uhh the story seems kind of interesting but also kinda leaves u wondering when its going to get actually suspenseful or exciting..but who knows maybe ur working up to some big climaxes...anyways keep it up and try ur best to make it cooler:)
better
i will say that the previous two disappointed me greatly. It was (as alot of other people are saying) mostly the voice acting.
But..
this episode seemed like alot more time was put into it, and it looked like you at least tried on the humor this time around. which made me think of how the progression will be further down the line. As always, i am intrigued to see where this series will go. Keep up the good work.