Yay for Flash-Ga! I loved this.. Instead of looking at the twitching and fluctuating speed of the story as flaws, I kinda look at it as a bit of a technique in itself. ^_^ Flash-Ga wouldnt be Flash-Ga without all the Flash flaws in it, after all :3
I loved the character animation in this.. Im an artist myself, but not so much in the flash realm :P In photoshop and on paper I do furre, yiff, anime, and some original stuff, but none with the seeming ease with which these characters were done, and in the time frame you completed it!
Heh.. rant rant rant. I'd love to know your DevArt name, because I wanna see what else you can do! Im thinking of getting one, too.. All in all, very good flash, keep up the good work, and Ill look out for your next OMGFLASH-GA. ^_^