Okay this was okay.
Before I comment on the movie I want to ask one question that will probably make me sound like an idiot. Is that a picture of you in your profile?
It is just funny cause usually all these anime flash girls usually look like dikes and things. But I guess you're an exception, and thats really good. Um....yeah.
Lol sorry for that.
Anyways get rid of your pre-loader and replace it with something better. Seriously something a bit simpler and not as messy. Also lose the girl with flying discs for the creator intro or whatever. That just looks bad.
This wasnt horrible. Your submissions are good and like you said it is hard to draw well with a mouse.