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Two girls on an picnic.

There used to be a girl I liked and she matched me in every way. She was everything I lacked. Animation inspired by the intimate moments we shared.

Did this around February, that's why the facial proportions aren't exactly accurate lol. Actually there was a whole plot behind it but certain issues got in the way and I had to stop working on it for awhile, then lost my motivation for it, so uploading now since I probably won't work on it more but heyyy at least I gave it a title screen!!

This is my first animation so if anyone has any critique, it would be much appreciated.

but honest to god, sometimes this girls face glowed like it was the only thing in my vision, it was surreal and I had to capture it

Made in Photoshop CC and AE CC, drew and colored every frame

Music :
"Water Lily" Kevin MacLeod
Licensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0


OMG! Is marvelous!

i hope you do more this is really beautiful :)

I LOVE IT! simple, chilling , sweat and it gives ya the friendly feeling!

and also it looked like it has alot of effort!

I don't do this often but here it goes:

The level of detail was adequate for the artistic task at hand and the effort you put into this meant the award for daily second place was well deserved. I get this strange feeling that your emphasis on color was inspired by artists on tumblr (i.e. colored lips cheeks, etc) which should not be a big deal, but perhaps the tumblr vibe didn't jive with me since it's been overused. Work on rendering objects like the violins at multiple angles to get the right perspective at multiple transitional angles like the ones found in the video and you should be good to go. The leaf's rendering was impeccable, but its timing and soundtrack cues were lacking. Keep practicing, your work is appreciated.

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zephyo responds:

thanks for the advice! :) I don't use tumblr except for posting my art; it's a common concept, monochrome with a splash of one color. Can you elaborate on the angles? Were they inconsistent throughout the frames? And I'm not very good with sound, I just put some uncopyrighted music i found online lol.

I love lesbians!

Except you're gender-neutral, right? So why are you portraying yourself as a girl?

zephyo responds:

not all lesbians are good people
And I'm a girl, I'm not sure why u think I'm gender neutral

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4.26 / 5.00

Aug 27, 2015
8:55 PM EDT
  • Frontpaged August 28, 2015
  • Review Crew Pick September 2, 2015
  • Daily 2nd Place August 29, 2015
  • Weekly 5th Place September 2, 2015