The looped ambiance noise got to me. I can't put a finger on it, but just something about it that was off. Other than that, it's a pretty cool experiment.
This is a chronicle of that one time when I shrunk down and lived in my dollhouse.
More is coming.
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The looped ambiance noise got to me. I can't put a finger on it, but just something about it that was off. Other than that, it's a pretty cool experiment.
I love this. It's greatly animated and the artwork is awesome. As for the story, it leaves so many open ended questions from logical ones (as "if the door was closed when you got in, how did it open to let the cat in?") to more phylosophical ones like "What does the second key open?" and " who else is there?"
Also I just finished the last televised saga of Bleach (anime) and in it there was a girl with the power to put anyone she wanted into any container she wanted until she let them out. She onced kept the neighbour she had a crush on in there until he rejected her very being. She calls this power "Dollhouse". So questions reflecting this also buzz through my mind.
I has question, the doll house, did you like zoomed in on everything inside the doll house or what?
it was a really well thought lil story but the animation needs help.
Good story, bad animation.
Advertised to be scary, in a way, it was, but also funny in a Ironic way (note: I just watched the Exorcist (1973), first time, not a skipped beat, shiver, or chill)
you could have made the whole thing animation, save the clash from happening.
giving you a 4.2