Good Animation, Slow story
The animation was very good, it's a nice style you have.
Some problems: Your music choice didn't fit the movie too well, it made the pace of the story look too slow.
Also, the story was pretty bland, nothing new here. If this was not your focus, and instead you were aiming for a good animation, you actually did it, but besides this, you should think a little more on your next story.
Fabulous animation! I find it hard to believe this is your first animation short! You have a lot of talent as an animator and as an artist. Everything moved together smoothly, and you had music and sound to match you movie well. Keep up the good work! =3
The Great Animators of Yore would be Proud
I love, love, love this short! The art is simplistic, but the cartoon as a whole have a very classic, Looney Tunes sort of feel to it as far as the gags and the story progression goes. Excellent work!!
Been a while since ive seen something good without ridiculous skills, so i thank you.
Alright. It's cute and funny. But a level of comedy like this (witch isn't that high)should be given animations of the same rate. I think thats all thats missing. Oh and some better music, too.