So starting out on this flick, It is easy to see that you have the knowledge and craftsmanship of a good flash artist here and you do know what you are doing as it shows, so nice efforts here. So Perhaps there are even more endeavors comming our way. This flash and the others like it have always shown some fresh art style smooth animation and interesting story A few things that would be great for this flash and it would show with some more effort so below are a few ideas that really could push this flash to the extra efforts, good luck.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvement points are always needed in any flash, but it sometimes comes off as negitive feedback but I will say that you have a good presentation here very well done.