i didnt
watch it yet but i bet its great
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I have put alot of effort into this one so vote fairly and enjoy!!!!
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not bad
potential, but you really need to work on rudimentary skills and making things look more natural. its kind of like you skipped the basics and went on to learn the cool effects first. also it almost seemed like it was just a picture sometimes. id say emphasise the freeze frames with something, maybe some flashing or something, and then also make things more fluid.
I see potential
I watched both your current movies, and while the sound and plots are still weak, the base art and animation is promising. Keep practicing your art, and find some cool inspiration to base your animations on and you've got lot of promise.
Wikk responds:
Wow thx you review i will get better and i will practice and i will get one of my movies someday on frontpage
This are sucky
Plot wasnt very good. Animations were kinda choppy. try a differant song next time.
Wikk responds:
Ok Thx 4 da review
Meh. Your first flash was better.
This dragged a bit, the plot was....odd to say the least, and didn't make a whole lot of sense. If you're going to do stories with action and plot, you need to make the action more action-y and the plot easier to follow. That and speed everything up. It ended up getting boring.
Wikk responds:
cool an administrater reviewed my work thx for da tip im actuly tryin a different style l8ter