Interesting character design. I like the concept. However, the only thing that really bothered me was that your character looks far too stiff. When he/she or it holds the gun it doesn't look natural. Congrats on working on this for 9 moths.
Reviews for "PHASE ONE"
3.5 stars probably for no real story except hes trying to do something. But being that this is just a prologue I can't wait to see where this series goes. Character design is pretty cool and I really liked the little teaser of the protagonist. With a little more work this could be awesome way to go man f*** the haters bro
I really liked the video, I can see that you put a lot of efford in this. I'm not trying to critic here, but tu help you improve, but I will point some things that I think are not perfect to my humble eye.
- The way the caracter runs: I can see when he is running that the feets are not "sticking" to the floor like they should be. I mean, when you run or walk, you put all your weigth on your feet and they stay there till you lift them. In your animation, the caracter's feet slide fowards before he lift them. You can fix this easily but slowing down it's horizontal move when he runs.
- Cam problem: In the scene where the caracter is going down on the elevator, the camera moves weirdly. I mean, you animate a movement and then another, for example, spining round something and then panning left. What I think you are doing not completly rigth, is the transition between this animations, it's like it stops for a frame and then change into the next animation. The animations are really good, how you move it it's really fluid and goes really well with the scene.
- Model of the caracter: The pants of the caracter looks like he poop on his pants. he has a aweful line there.
Pros:
- You made a really good job with the envorment, with something really simple, you made something really cool! Good Job!
- The music is really nice and goes well with the movie
- I like the way to made every scene, it gives it some mistireous that I like
Good work! Jope to see more of this story comming soon :D
You don't see alot of 3d stuff on newgrounds
I liked it but it needs more plot.
9 months for greyish backdrops (beautifully done by the way) awesome lighting effects but I can't get over how the character moved... looked like he had a stick shoved up someplace, and his torso up hardly had any movement just a small bobbing side to side. I love scenery and the lights feels Dead Spacey to me keep up the work and hope to see something with a little more story and a little more flare to show off.