i liked it, only thing i would bother pointing out is that you should work on the running and walking animation looked a little to robotic.
Reviews for "PHASE ONE"
I'm not one of those review freaks. But I'd really like to say sth here. I think you put a lot of effort into this, but as Kieroman mentioned I think you should've worked on the walking-running cycle and on the way he holds his weapon. Also @ 1:24 that column moves a bit weird. Not sure if it was your intention or it just looks weird. But nvm that. And in my opinion everything is a bit too square. You can see that your maps consist of a lot of smaller objects that all put together build the world- I really liked the sounds and the soundtracks. In general I think it's amazing.. you should definitely continue working on this masterpiece :)
I thought this was really well done considering it's 3D. Your backgrounds were amazing, but the character's leg motion was kinda weird. However that is to be expected since people are the hardest things to do in 3D. Also I have to admit it was a bit boring and felt longer than it was. But it looks amazing and trust me I know how difficult 3D shit is.
Nice animation overall, but there are some things that bothered me and some that I liked, im going to try to list them:
1. Loved the camera work, nice transitions, and it gave good storytelling with it.
2. the animation bothered me in some details, like the hips, they never move with the running or walk, and the upper body is almost static in the running transition, there should be more movement there.
3. the lighting, GOD it was GOOD!, it helped with the mood, same as the cameras, nice job.
and finally 4. dunno if you modeled all of it (I suppose you did) but that is really good modeling, liked the colors too, really thrilling and gloom like.
Welp that is all of it, a little tip would be to make the animation more lively, don't be afraid to exaggerate the movements and to make more parts in the body move. Can't wait to see more :)
Of this took 9 months then we are in for a bit of a wait.