You know what would have ,made this better...a narrator. good job though!
Reviews for "PHASE ONE"
Interesting character design. I like the concept. However, the only thing that really bothered me was that your character looks far too stiff. When he/she or it holds the gun it doesn't look natural. Congrats on working on this for 9 moths.
I thought the graphics were pretty nice and i love the mysteriousness of the film. A couple of things that kind irk is me one: the way he runs. his back is too straight and he runs really stiffly. Also he lifts his knees up a bit too high and extends the legs too far out when running. seems oddly unrealistic. and second: the way he grips his spas12 when running i guess. it's held at a awkward angle. The hand sporting the gun is way too far out the side. The gun is also parallel to the ground. should be at a more relaxed 45 degree angle and more closer to the chest of the character. other than that, i thought this was great !
keep up the great work my fren
Great style and look about everything, I love it. Just needs work on the animated movement. :)
I Love the environment is great i enjoy the feel you get but i am sure you have had comments on the running the only reason people was questioning it is because it is unnatural the character is stiff if you do not have access to mo-cap you should try to do video references other then that great job and glad you shared your work from one 3d artist to another