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Reviews for "Losing Track"

what?

ok well I've just never been a fan of these weird artsy animations (I'm just guessing that's what it's suppose to be) but that's not why I gave it two stars. the reason for that is just because it was plain and simply well, sloppy. I mean there wasn't much of a background, the characters barely moved, the only real animation I saw was the eyes, and well it's not as if any thought went into the story line it was just random stuff. so all in all I just really didn't like it

Rutger responds:

Yeah, it's ok. I didn't put a lot of work in it either. So it's alright :3

Hmmmm

Drugs can do so much damage to your brain.

Rutger responds:

lol

The story

Drugs are very bad...and it makes you do things..stupid things..like make this crap

Rutger responds:

lol
great!

huh?

wat?

Rutger responds:

wut

Frankly, I don't like it

You don't give the plot nor the character any development. The only "story" I'm getting from this is: weird looking guy is standing, weird-looking guy blinks and light shoots out of one eye, weird-looking guy sits on something, weird-looking guy finds something, weird-looking guy does some nom nom nom on something weird-looking, and a weird-looking thing pops out. It'd be helpful if we can get a sense of who/what these things are, instead of just trying to be satisfied with weird-looking things.

The noise was just...obscure. It sounded terrible to the point that I'm not going to call it music (and I'm very lenient on what I consider music). It's basically a bunch of random noises thrown together, with a constant screeching noise that would rank pretty high on a lot of people's Pet-Peeves list. The noise was appropriate for this flash though, because...well it's weird-sounding.

The artwork isn't bad, but again, it's just weird. I'm okay with weird, but you should at least make a good reason for things to be weird.

Rutger responds:

it's just that like, most people dislike it. that's okay.