Losing Track of a storyline
I'm sorry author. Did you say this has a story? What you forgot to mention was that it has no logic, or is lacking sufficient animation to denote the string of logic that could have possibly composed a real "story". The transitions are very poorly done and make the latter half more confusing than ever. To top it all off, that consistent screeching sound is possibly the worst, ear-raping ambiance I've listened to in a while.