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Reviews for "Losing Track"

I did like it!

ofcourse its hard to follow the story :P but i liked the style, the minimalistic look of this flash the colours and the psychedelic feeling you get when u watch this, its a little bit to short but for a mini project and a experiment it was good enough!
well deserved 8/10 4/5.

Rutger responds:

Thanks man! :D

????

i dont get it

Rutger responds:

thats cool.

Interesting

Not the best I've seen but not bad

Rutger responds:

thanks man :3
this was just 2 days of work to take a little pause from other projects i'm working on.
i promise they'll contain more frame by frame, backgrounds, etc.

Well

Whether it was experimental or not does nothing to change the fact that it was by and large uninteresting and merely above average in the animation/art department at best. I reserve no qualms concerning the length, could've been shorter for all I care so long as it was good, but it wasn't.

Rutger responds:

yeah, this is very boring to a lot of people.
it's ok. this isn't a major project.

Losing Track of a storyline

I'm sorry author. Did you say this has a story? What you forgot to mention was that it has no logic, or is lacking sufficient animation to denote the string of logic that could have possibly composed a real "story". The transitions are very poorly done and make the latter half more confusing than ever. To top it all off, that consistent screeching sound is possibly the worst, ear-raping ambiance I've listened to in a while.

Rutger responds:

It has logic, read a few reviews down. They explain the story.

I can see why you dislike this, so it's okay hah.