Ehhh
I can see that you have some artistic talent, definitely. I would suggest something resembling a plot, and perhaps and bit more time and effort. I know I sound like an English teacher, but I think you can do much better.
Reviews for "Losing Track"
Rutger responds:
I know :3
Check out Zimmi EP 1. It has a storyline and plot.
I bet you'd like that then.
WTF
Wth was that. i am completley lost about wat i just saw. u still did some good animation but still it mafe no sense.
Rutger responds:
It makes sense, watch it a few times, think about it.... ;D
Woaaahh...
Yeh ive lost track now
What the hell was that
Is this some 3 year and up story
Or theres actually a proper storyline here
Since i mostly comment things that are awesome and give 10/10
Ill be nice and give 5/10(As generous as i can get)
Rutger responds:
Well thanks for the 5 then!.
The story is explained by someone a few reviews back.
What?
What? The animation was good no problems there but...
What the heck just happened?
Rutger responds:
it has been explained a few times in other reviews, i suggest you read em :3
Thanks!
???
I know the flash I just made could be A LOT better, but this has a lot you could add because I thought it was pointless. Good drawing though. Score is for drawing only.
Rutger responds:
why then do people rate stuff that's OMG RANDOM SO RANDOM very high? ;D
thanks though