Reviews for Losing Track

[Fartnugge]

Agreed with guy below mw

2 for the fact that you DID animate something. The animation, while present, was terrible. The fact that it not only had a poop-tastic story but you had to figure out the poop-tastic story line is even worse. It's not even figuring it out; you basically said make up your own story line. Thats not what you said in the description but that is what you said through the movie.

Another 1 point for having sound, even though fingernails in chalk board would have sounded better.

Basically I hope to dear God that Zimmi or what ever is better than this. But keep practicing: practice can make even the creator of this, it could make even ME, good at flash and animation.

Rutger responds:

POOPTASTIC!

I only animated the eye really. The rest were tweens. So it can't be terrible. Just not really frame by frame.
Take a look at some stick animations.
Tthis was just a short thingie though. So I get your opinion.

[patricivan]

hmm...

I dont get it...

Rutger responds:

that is okay.

[fea-tures]

This is clearly deep

because nothing happened..... very profound!

No character interaction of any kind..... besides the eye abandoning its body in its hour of need, sentient eyes are a bitch! eh?

Rutger responds:

yup

[legomaestro]

?? Uh This is-

I have no idea what this means, i can only rate the fact that you can draw, but otherwise? Err. Its not so good. No story, Irritating music, and no promise for anything, i could only get that he had crashed on a planet by the fact that you actually wrote it. Sorry, but your other stuff are better!

[TheFlackman]

Im not sayin it was terrible, but it lacked a lot

Like many people below me said, there really wasnt much to this flash. drawings were nice, but aside from that I couldnt get any kind of story out of it outside of what you wrote in the description. Music definetly did get real old real quick, would recomend pulling whatever it is you have for it and finding something new. Overall: ok drawings, but thats about it.

Rutger responds:

yeah thanksss