What?
Okay, ummm....I don't get it. I see a guy and then he blinks and then a spaceship crashes and he finds another alien. Then there's a flashy thing floating in the sky and the other alien flies away. An explanation would be nice.
Reviews for "Losing Track"
Rutger responds:
Ahem.
Here it goes.
The Alien is lost on an unknown planet, and looks for some escape, or food. Something that will make him survive. While he's sitting against his crashed ship, another ship crashes on the planet.
He starts eating the other alien.
The other alien turns out to be alive, and activates an explosion. His eye survives.
Well
Whether it was experimental or not does nothing to change the fact that it was by and large uninteresting and merely above average in the animation/art department at best. I reserve no qualms concerning the length, could've been shorter for all I care so long as it was good, but it wasn't.
Rutger responds:
yeah, this is very boring to a lot of people.
it's ok. this isn't a major project.
What story?
Honestly, I couldn't understand what the story was here. Yes I read the author comments and the description, however if I'm looking at a short and it doesn't seem to match up to the description or I'm sitting here confused as to what's going on....then it's definitely not getting a 10.
The animation is good, and the sound is a bit trippy. From what I could gather that squid thing was the alien that crash landed on the planet?
Losing Track is very fitting title as the viewer will lose track of what the actual story is....due to confusion.
Rutger responds:
yup!
MY EARS.
The sound makes my ears BLEED.
Rutger responds:
put the volume down? :3
Ehhh
I can see that you have some artistic talent, definitely. I would suggest something resembling a plot, and perhaps and bit more time and effort. I know I sound like an English teacher, but I think you can do much better.
Rutger responds:
I know :3
Check out Zimmi EP 1. It has a storyline and plot.
I bet you'd like that then.