Tears of michael jackson!
Pretty nice! Love the bass in this for sure. The vocals are a lil too loud in my opinion but other then that everything works well!
Wyldfyre1
Reviews for "Wyze - Tears of a Child"
Blasphem-E responds:
Glad you liked it
memories
heh its ok great lyrics,terrible singing but good enough for me to like it.
amazing idea here
Blasphem-E responds:
haha, thanks for the review man
Decent
I liked the lyrics. Good song overall.
Things I think that could be improved:
Your voice seems a little "light" I don't know how to really explain it other than it would be better if you "roughened" it up some. (If that makes any sence)
I also think that this song could use some better drums, or rougher beat overall. I realize where you are going with the loop in the background...I just think it would be better if the drums were stronger or more rough.
Blasphem-E responds:
Ya, I get what you mean, been working at that a lot the last severa days with other tracks. My next few vocal tracks will be a lot better
way to go
I loved the texts, they were pretty good a tad depressing but no worries. Loved the beat too. for advice, next time you could try focusing on making the vocals sound a lil' bit rougher, you're not reading, you're rapping :). The texts may be good, but you always have to bring them the way you feel them.
Thumbs up for shadowville for making the beat by the way, it was really good.
Blasphem-E responds:
Ya, Shadowville is freaking awesome
this was good...
lyrics were great, beat was sick, only thing is, the voice doesn't fit too well.
overall, this was a good track.
Blasphem-E responds:
Glad you liked it