Deep
I love story-telling tracks. This shit sounds much better than your past tracks man, your delivery and flow sound much better as well. This track is real good, stay up.
Reviews for "Wyze - Tears of a Child"
Blasphem-E responds:
Ya man, there's something I love about story telling tracks as well. This is my third attempt at one, and probably my only decent one haha. Glad you enjoyed it man.
Ohw.
This is actually really good, the lyrics are very deep and the beat is kinda smooth... the voice sounds a little bland in the song, but that gives it a charm as well (:
Blasphem-E responds:
glad you liked it :)
very G
i just wish you would've posted the lyrics up =/
did you do any ad libs?
-UNIQUE LINX-
Blasphem-E responds:
No adlibs. Lyrics coming.
You're a fuckin asshole!
Why'd have to go and make me all depressed, that aint cool man!
But in all seriousness, this track is deep. My favourite flow moment was at the "But the sedatives force him to lie still and emulate-The dead" part, you mastered this beat. The last line: "Doctor hears no pulse so he arrives in haste Sees the kid on the floor, smile on his face"-> damn... thats almost as sad as that scene in King Kong when the big ape gets face fucked with chlorophyll...a single tear came out.
The mixing on this track is also exceptional. There are a few spots where it could have been touched up. For example: you can hear some parts when the mic was moved while recording.
Overall great track: I never expected this track to be so powerful when I read the verses on Facebook, props bro. Keep at it! How about make some positive happy tracks? Possibly about leprechauns and/or jackalopes.
Blasphem-E responds:
leprechauns and jackalopes having sex with each other
Holy shit...
This is way too familiar to me... o_e" The lyrics are really good, and I like the feeling to it. However, don't want to sound insulting, but I would have preferred another vocalist. Maybe some distortion as well, especially when you repeat that one verse "tears of a child".
Blasphem-E responds:
Eh.... as I've said, I recognize that I'm still working on the right voice