not to offend
your voice don't fit for rap...In my opinion though.
Nice lyrics though. Good beat...Solid and smooth but back to the voice, DOn't really fit.
Nice though 8/10 3/5
Reviews for "Wyze - Tears of a Child"
Blasphem-E responds:
Ya, I'm still working on finding the right voice. No offense taken dude.
wow
what a depressing song. Clever though
Blasphem-E responds:
Yes, not the happiest thing ever
Good Stuff
I usually browse as an anonymous poster, lurking and gathering more audio while leaving no trace of my existence. For some time now I have been meaning to make an account, and reading your lyrics and wanting to leave a review motivated me to do so.
Let me say I am not a fan of rap, and also I'm not a fan of lyrical music either. That's two strikes against you and I usually stop a song at one. Rap is s a very respectable art style that isn't me, but the lyrics I like. You really pull at the strings of the heart and mind and I can clearly see this kid and I feel a sense of empathy for him.
I like the creative mind you've got, though through personal preference it's not where I would have taken the lyrics. Nonetheless good job.
Blasphem-E responds:
Ya, it is a bit of a downer. Glad you can appreciate it though
Could be better but....
its good
Blasphem-E responds:
glad you like it
Well
It has a good story, nice beats, but as some other guys have noted, your lyrics didn't exactly fit the beats too well. Which is ok, but it came out shaky. regardless, nice song. (And I do believe you pronounced plague{play-ga} as plag{pl-ag} )
Blasphem-E responds:
ah, oops. thanks for the review