Forced
I think the vocals sound a little to forced and you need to calm down and maybe try it in a little more of a regular-speech voice. idk...I can't really explain what I mean, I just think you should drop your voice a little, you know, make it sound a little more melancholy and emotional. I like it otherwise
Ya, as I've said, I'm still working on the voice. I'll keep your suggestions in mind though. Thanks for the review
Tears of michael jackson!
Pretty nice! Love the bass in this for sure. The vocals are a lil too loud in my opinion but other then that everything works well!
Wyldfyre1
Glad you liked it
Nice!
This is really great. Amazing lyrics. As other people have said my only problem is the singing, and the chorus didnt work out too well. But otherwise its absolutely awesome. Keep up the great work.
Thanks, glad you liked it
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gllad you enjoyed it
Nice.
This is really good. The only thing I can complain about is the vocals. You're voice doesn't really work well for rap but you've already said you're trying to find the right voice so I'm not gonna say more about it. I personally think it would sound better if you rapped to the beat a bit better. Right now you're rapping on the beat but you let some words carry over beats, sometimes start a tad late etc. While this does work for some songs, I think it would sound better if you made it tighter in this one.
I like the soundtrack and the lyrics are great. Keep it up.
Thanks for the great review. I'll definitely continue to work at it