Good but..
Your voice is too white xD Great lyrics but modifying your voice would help.
Reviews for "Wyze - Tears of a Child"
Blasphem-E responds:
Haha, I'm still finding my voice. I think it was better in "stop me" personally but meh. Thanks for the review man
Nice story
I like how you explained the situation of the child and his rebellion of getting bullied in class then ultimately leading to his own death. Both the flow and the beat is deep man.
Blasphem-E responds:
Glad you liked it man, but I can't take credit for the beat. That was Shadowville Productions.
welll
i think ur right ur lyrics is tight but ur voice aint, try calming down speak with the bass in ur voice or summin i dnt know try it out see wut happens or maybe use the voice changer like t pain or summin i dnt know but ur white people can rap but just gotta find da right tone of voice but its tight n the beat is fire
Blasphem-E responds:
Thanks dude. As I've said, I think I'm starting to get the hang of it with some tracks I'm working on
Been my top song for weeks
I have been listening non-stop to this song for a really long time. I have a great respect for the message these lyrics tell, and the emotions that it brings. The vocalist is a little bland, but that only helps sell the song. I love the beat, the track, everything! Keep it up, you've earned a lot of respect from me.
Blasphem-E responds:
Thanks dude. Sorry I didn't notice this right away. Glad you liked this :)
10 stars
touching.whoever gives this less than 10 deserves to die.
Blasphem-E responds:
Glad you thought so man